Hug in spring_1200字

《Hug in spring_1200字》

Herecomesspring.

Theworldcomestoitself.

ItookmyluggageandhadanextemporaneoustravellastSunday.

Firstly,Iwentcampinginamountainnearmyhometown.Airinthatmountainisfresherthanthatincitywhichsmellsalittledisgusting.HereIhadabiglunchwhichcontainedvariousfoodssuchasfish,chicken,muttonandsoon.Whenwewerehavinglunch,birdskeptcompanywithus.Theysangattractivesongswhichmadeusunbuttoned.

Inmoderncitylife,wearealwaysworriedaboutourpersonalaffairs,andhardlyhavetimetorelaxourselves.So,Imadebestofthisenjoyabletimetoenjoymylife.

Secondly,Iwenttofishingonaboatwithmyfatherinariverwheretreesstand.Flowersweresinging,birdsweresinging,evenfishweresinging.Springisamagicseason.Itcangivepeoplehopeandenergytostruggleforourgoals.

Asawill-graduatedstudent,Ilearnedalotfromthistrip.

AsIsaid,springisaseasonwhichisfullofpowerandmagic.Everythingischanging.Nothingisimpossible.Springstartslivesandputhopeinourmind.HardandboringthoughCollegeentranceexaminationis,Iwillencouragemyselftostruggletotheend,justascockroaches.

Fighting!

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The spring is coming; and the weather becomes warmer and warmer. LastSunday, I went outing with my parents.

First,wewentcampinginamountainnearmyhometown.Airinthatmountainismuch fresherthanthatinthe city. Therewehadabiglunchwhichcontainedvariousfoodssuchasfish,chicken,muttonandsoon. Whenwe werehavinglunch,birdskeptflying aroundus. Theysang songswhichmadeus happier. At that moment, my father said, “Inmoderncitylife,wearealwaysworriedaboutourpersonalaffairs,andhardlyhavetimetorelax ourselves.So,let’s makebestuse ofthisenjoyabletimetoenjoyourselves.” Then,Iwentfishingonaboatwithmyfatherinariverwheretreesstand.Birdsweresinging,evenfisharesinging.

Springisreally amagicseason.Itcangivepeoplehopeandenergytostrugglefortheir goals. Springstartslivesandputs hopeinourmind.Hardandboringthoughcollegeentranceexaminationis,Iwillencouragemyselftostruggletotheend.

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