My life_600字

《My life_600字》

　　My name is Alex Shen .May you do not wonder me , but only I understand you enough. I am amedium student . And I only have some friends because I am shy . Although I am good with classmates , butmy heart is full of with lonely . So I do not talk with peoplerarely .I like readingfantasyfiction and play some computer games . My parents wane me get goodsenior high school . So they are strict to me . I see others are so free and get good grades . So I do not understand that . I do not wonder I should do anything now.If you wonder I can do something , please write aletter to me.Thank you!

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My name is Alex Shen. I am amiddle school student. And I have a few friends because I am shy. Although I get on well with my classmates, I still feellonely sometimes.I seldom talk with others.I like readingfantasyfictions and play computer games. My parents want me to go to a bettersenior high school, so they are strict with me. But I know some classmates who have good grades are much freer. So I do not understand that. I am wondering what I should do now. If you know what I can do, please write to me. Thank you!

修改老师：Crystal 老师

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